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More scripts added.
Next ... I think I have to portray Baron Qazkar.
Oh, I also need to portray Juvenile Jukaga wearing a uniform? The naive cub was saying "It will be glorious, I have been asked to fly in the lead strike!"
[2020-02] Some novel character portraits
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Next ... I think I have to portray Baron Qazkar.
Oh, I also need to portray Juvenile Jukaga wearing a uniform? The naive cub was saying "It will be glorious, I have been asked to fly in the lead strike!"
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Now, the draft script of Chapter 4, Part 1 is there. Try it out? 😀
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I have finished the draft visual novel of the military conference part of Action Stations, Chapter 4.
Now there is a local package (win32 version. If you need a macOS version, please let me know) :
It runs much smoother.
Now there is a local package (win32 version. If you need a macOS version, please let me know) :
It runs much smoother.
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wiese.hano
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I'd do it on my own. But as a German guy I'm not a super duper translator, what means that it shouldn't be me, as you can recognize gazing on my messages on the forums. ("super duper" that's a German expression meaning "very good or on a very high quality".)
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Thanks so much!
Sorry for the typos, I will be more carefully. And ... I think I could just post the script files here. Load it to a text editor and you could read the scripts easily. I think I could make this visual novel open source recently.
Could I ask for the use of spaces in English punctuation? For example:
A. This one seems to be OK...
B. But Google Translate gives me this ...
A. "It stops here. "
B. "It stops here."
A. (It stops here. )
B. (It stops here.)
What are the correct space usages? I would like to input script lines as normatively as possible. Thank you!
Edit: 05-07 Update scripts to the latest version. I think now I have most of the typos fixed.
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Tiny Theater 001:
Reserved at the moment...
Reserved at the moment...
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wiese.hano
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The correct versions are the ones without the spaces. Don't know why Google is giving you the right ones. You may also want to look here: https://www.deepl.com/translator
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Sorry, actually it was Google search...
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Nope, I don't believe so.
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DeepL is amazing! It even accepts a certain level of dialect! Thanks so much!
BTW, the visual novel demo was updated and the VIP boy is finally here.
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New screenshots:
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Harga nar Ki'ra
(Laughing)
"The Baron Jukaga thinks I have taken leave of my senses!"
First attempt at drawing an open-mouthed, laughing expression. It's very tough indeed.
It's important to make the character laugh and not overdo it, but also to be aesthetically pleasing.
Once again, FF14 Hrothgars are really good models!
(Laughing)
"The Baron Jukaga thinks I have taken leave of my senses!"
First attempt at drawing an open-mouthed, laughing expression. It's very tough indeed.
It's important to make the character laugh and not overdo it, but also to be aesthetically pleasing.
Once again, FF14 Hrothgars are really good models!
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Looks pretty decent as all of your work.
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Thanks! Now the colored version is there.
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Chancellor Melek
Coloring Test:
Now my styling skills are probably improved a little, so I've upgraded Melek's portrait to version 2.0. I am trying to combine Melek's WC3 style and his WC4 style, and there are of course some considerations of my own. I guess the less intimidating-looking Melek might have seemed more persuasive when he said "My race no longer presents a threat".
EDIT: 05-22 I just finished a work of Melek bowing.
Coloring Test:
Now my styling skills are probably improved a little, so I've upgraded Melek's portrait to version 2.0. I am trying to combine Melek's WC3 style and his WC4 style, and there are of course some considerations of my own. I guess the less intimidating-looking Melek might have seemed more persuasive when he said "My race no longer presents a threat".
EDIT: 05-22 I just finished a work of Melek bowing.
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Now, I have basically finished the story based on Action Stations Chapter 4. So, what should be the next part? 😉
Excuse me, may I ask a question? Which form is correct?
A. "And...what am I in their eyes?"
B. "And... what am I in their eyes?"
Thanks so much!
Excuse me, may I ask a question? Which form is correct?
A. "And...what am I in their eyes?"
B. "And... what am I in their eyes?"
Thanks so much!