it's been a while since this forum has been active, so i'l start a new thread with the following question:
are relationships beyond friendship (dating & intimacy) allowed on Confed capships?
I ask out of curiosity and because it plays a big part in the novel
other comments about the interplay between Trent and Elise are welcome too
are relationships beyond friendship (dating & intimacy) allowed on Confed capships?
I ask out of curiosity and because it plays a big part in the novel
other comments about the interplay between Trent and Elise are welcome too

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Sparks knew about it quite early, and if she hadn't worked it out then, she would have known it along with everyone else when they kissed in front of the celebration on the flight deck.
But your point is good. And no, Tolwyn is definitely not spiteful, at least not by the Special Operations. I have to say, when I first played SO1, I was surprised at how friendly Tolwyn was to Blair in recommending him to Special Ops. Even when telling Blair to obey Taggart's orders, it seemed to me that Tolwyn would say that rather jokingly.
No picture will not give your story the "umph" to make it the romance story that you wish for it to be. It's just like eating a hot dog without the bun, or reading a book without the book, or watching a porn without the synthetic techno beat music 