He'll Be Brief(ing) (September 9, 2007)

[Bandit LOAF]

IronDuke has released two 'screens' from his Wing Commander Tac Ops pen and paper game project. He says: "I spent some time on designing character sheets and briefings, as well. The current designs would work for PBM gaming and the PC game Mike-L is still working on. They're more or less drafts, so feel free to tell me what you think!" They look good to me!

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Original update published on September 9, 2007

 

[LeHah]

I think they look really good.

Two small suggestions, if I might. The first is the picture you used for the character bio looks a little too much like you took it out of a book you found at a barber shop. Obviously, you probably can't put someone in a Confed flight suit - but its a little TOO stylish, you know?

The second is that the briefing picture is a bit too dark, at least on my monitor...

 

[Ironduke]

Let me quote myself here:

Well, I'd like to change the pilot pic into something more WC2-like with, you know, pixels and all.

And you think the briefing map backdrop (starfield) is too dark? Or is it too dark in general?

Anyway, thanks for the feedback!