Chronicles of the Claw Redux


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I had started writing this a couple years ago, but I had to stop when I went to college and ROTC. I'm thinking about starting it up again and I was interested in your feedback on the part I've already written. The story is attached as two word files to this post. The pages are set up like you were reading a paperback. Comments welcome and Merry Christmas!


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