Well..well... I'm happy to know you enjoyed it (and from Bandit LOAF, that is... quite wonderful) even if I really don't know how many people read the story...
So, I will try to continue and write other chapters (I've got lots of ideas...)
Just two things I want you to answer:
- did you find some vocabulary errors ?
- need some help about Marines' ranks in WC Universe; i'm not sure that Corporal or Sergeant are good...
Thanks a lot
Sincerely, from a frenchman...