Scum indeed
I have to agree with Skyfox
Scum would be to kind in my honest opinion. All we can hope for is that those two will be banned from this forum. I have no respect for them what so ever.
They should be under parental supersvision from now on, since the obiously aren't old enough...
Looks great! I do wonder if it will ever go public, I'm creating a own Scifi universe, and I need something like this for planning and background info! :D Great, really great work!