I know you guys are very busy, but the archives aren't updated as frequently as they used to be. The most recent update in the archive is April 17, the earliest post on the front page is April 20. That's two days I'm missing. (Oh no! Shock horror!)
Well..well... I'm happy to know you enjoyed it (and from Bandit LOAF, that is... quite wonderful) even if I really don't know how many people read the story...
So, I will try to continue and write other chapters (I've got lots of ideas...)
Just two things I want you to answer:
- did you find some vocabulary errors ?
- need some help about Marines' ranks in WC Universe; i'm not sure that Corporal or Sergeant are good...
Hmm, I'm not sure if Corporal and Sargeant are good even in the real universe (but I'm probably wrong). Don't the Marines - at least the US Marines - have Lance Corporal and a bunch of other weird ranks?