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I think we can all agree the WC Universe ain't perfect. I'm starting to become of the mind that a lot of the stuff in the Movie didn't actually "happen," (i.e. Gerald and Sansky didn't know Paladin was in the military... come on, Blair and Angel's little "romance," and the whole Bossman thing is...

I was almost tempted to point out that Joshua Bondarevsky was a Marine, but then I remembered this is an alternate history thing, so that's fine, I suppose. Although I'm still not entirely sure where your story is going. Also, it's a bad idea to randomly switch tenses from past to present and...

You have good points, man. Except let's hope they never remake a WC game. Maybe if they ever get around to making a new one, such non-lethal options would be interesting.

Well, I assume there will be more, but let me comment on what you have so far. Maybe it's just the news brief part, but I thought your story was the WC2-era. With only 12 fighters to defend against an enemy force of at least 130, the defenses were overwhelmed and the fighters, as well as...

Well, it is certainly heart-warming to hear that, LOAF. By the way, what is the current explanation?

Ah, well, that's cool, I suppose. Still, the disclaimer I think you can do without.

Eh, I got a half-hour to kill, so I read your Prologue. I'm never a fan of "alternate histories," accept when they're done with REAL history (Harry Turtledove, anyone?). But so far this seems to work, although Khasra sneezing and blowing himself up is a little silly (and the little disclaimer...

Eat penguin shit, you ass-spelunkers... just keeding! :-D Okay, per Quarto's admonishing tone, I've edited a few things. Will Piranhas work instead of Wasps? :rolleyes: Thanks again, guys.

Well, yeah, Quarto, I know what you mean. But you can't please everyone...

Ghorah Khar. Right. Yeah, Paladin's dialogue is a little fucked up. I think I was going for "You be thankful..." but it didn't quite come out that way. :rolleyes: And I have to defend my characterization of Casey's wife. She's based off a friend of mine... And drama is to be human. So, yes...

Thanks for the comments, guys! They're really nice. Mekt, you gave the most detailed comments, so allow me to respond: -My (perhaps flawed) reasoning: Casey was born in 2656, and according to my research he took a couple years off after highschool before he joined the Academy, so this puts...

Okay, well, although seemingly nobody cares, I actually finished the first chapter just now. I'm going for simple here, so it's not too involved. Enjoy! PS: Hopefully, nobody has trouble downloading the .doc file.

Okay, not to bump up my own thread, because I hate it when people do that, but I think I'm going to start writing this thing sometime this week. So expect a first chapter by Saturday. I know you're all holding your breath. :rolleyes:

Hey, Quarto. Well, I'm not exactly trying to use preexisting characters, that's just sort of how it worked out. Most of them are mere "cameos," anyway. As for Paladin being President, well, I think I'll stick with that.

Well, I've had more than six years to hone my WC knowledge. Plus, there's the CIC's encyclopedia, which will be helpful considering most of my WC stuff is still at home, except for Prophecy, WC1, and the movie on DVD.

Okay, for those who have been here a while, you might know that I've dabbled in WC fan fiction, and that most of my output has been pretty... well, crappy. But recently my interest in WC has been waxing (as opposed to waning), and I've had the desire to revisit the world of WC "literature," and...

Disappointed. But it was okay, not terrible.

To answer the original question. Fleet Action.

They still show Pete and Pete reruns?

Good points, all, Mr. Lesnick. -Wes.