Viper61 said:Alright, I'm going to post early (since I'm planning on reading a chapter a day it would take me a while to give you feedback) so some of my observations mihgt be explained later but I've read the Prologue and I've got some questions/observations (disclaimer: this is your project so you do whatever you want to , but these are my suggestions):
Is this live fire? Like if the missile actually hits, Confed is going to be short a few pilots?
Why Arrows? At this point I figure the Arrow was being relegated to ISS and such (being replaced by the Piranha).
Stealth Arrows were painted by a missiles radar? That's some powerful radar.
Your ODIN missile bears a striking resemblance to the Tracker MIRV. Plus, while we're on the subject, missiles spoof pretty easily in the Prophecy era, I don't think it takes a wonderful pilot to evade one.