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Extremely awesome render, congratulations!
Actually, fire in the Concordia's launch bays was pretty common in WC2.
I think the Connie should be a bit more aflame in her final dive. Not burning from bow to stern but certainly looking like she went down with more of a fight.
I think the second one is perfect the way it is. She's blazing away on the inside from some lucky solid hit, but the outside isn't because it's outer space.