Chapter 3 of NAE3 is here!

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Dexter

Spaceman
Well, chapter 3 of 'Nephilim - An Enlightening III' has finally been posted by my lazy self... it may not be as good since I haven't written in a long time, but please vote and give me any of your suggestions to improve my writing.

Please note the new address of my page : jupiterhq.tripod.com

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- Arnav 'Dexter' Manchanda
http://jupiterhq.tripod.com


[This message has been edited by Dexter (edited June 05, 2000).]
 
Looks good Dexter!

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I might be right, I might be wrong, but then again, I just might not care either. Got a problem with that?--Me.
 
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Like always a kickass story.

A suggestion maybe: You could rename the new fighters, bex-cause WC already has "Wraiths"
Or is it a tribute?
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The time is near.
There are still quite a few days remaining.

I don't care for fame, power or money...
I just want to FIGHT!
-Sanosuke Sagara
 
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Maybe he ment it to be like a Wraith 2 or something, or a 'B' model or something.

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Administrator: UBW 5th Fleet
Member of the LMG and hating it (Disgruntled Man)
I might be right, I might be wrong, but then again, I just might not care either. Got a problem with that?--Me.
 
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