Band of Brothers: Chapter Three- - Ambush...

[Quarto]

Oh, hang on. <Smacks himself on the head> Read the story first, comment later.

Yeah, I see you already changed the route so you don't go through Enigma or Niven. Great. This looks just fine for the route. Presumably, there will be no enemy presence in Lucas, McCaffrey, or Shelton, since the Kilrathi are trying to get to Sol.

Hey, maybe you should add a little section in there about their passage through Repleetah? No need for enemy encounters or anything, just a few comments from the characters about the great Battle of Repleetah, and all that. The reference material you'd need is in the Victory Streak (I think) or Kilrathi Saga manual.

 

[klaus]

Hmmm, I think I'll have to read the story again. I'm getting lost in all this system name switcheroo.

Perhaps , after the decision is made, someone could draw a map showing the systems included in the story, something like Primarch(did I get the name right?) did for his Rebellion story.

Speaking of Primarch, where the hell went the guy?

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[Quarto]

Hmm, a map of the Enigma Sector frontlines in '65. Yes, that could be interesting... I'll think about it... maybe

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I don't know where Primarch went. He was here, and he disappeared. Maybe he just doesn't have time to write right now - it is the end of the school year in the northern hemisphere, you know.

Uh, Dralthi5? I just found a little detail that you need to change

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*“ Um, yes, sir. Chief Hornby locked that problem down while we were in the Niven System, sir. Our engines are now operating at one-hundred percent efficiency, Captain.”* - I don't think we're in Niven any more

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[Dralthi5]

Yes, it worked!

Good, now I can (hopefully) move on to Ch. 5.

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[Quarto]

It worked? What worked? The Trk Harna thing? Just keep in mind what I said about them rebelling so close to K'tithrak Mang

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[Dralthi5]

Yeah, okay.

<Yawn>. 3 AM? Yeesh, I need to hit the sack.

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[klaus]

Primarch is still alive. Revamped his own page, posted Episode 3 for his Rebellion missions and intends to do even one more mission pack.

Sorry about the "off topicity"

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[Dralthi5]

No problem. "Off topicity" has developed into an art form here at the CZ.

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