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    Progressive Darkness

    Chapter 3 will be finished soon. I'm just posting to keep this thread alive until it's up.
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    Sorry about taking so long and not posting this on Saturday as promised, I accidently deleted the file I was keeping the story under and had to rewrite it. Chapter 2 Twelve fighters (Six Rapiers, four Hornets, two Raptors, and two Scimitar) launch from the Hoover. “Here we go…” Says...
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    Very nice. :) I just need to do a few more things and the second chapter will be up tonight.
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    Sorry for the delay, I got caught up in another project. The second chapter will be up within the week.
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    I'm saving the fight scene for the second chapter, I'm going to take my time and make it elaborate.
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    Chapter 1 Admiral Cartwright stares out his office window, smoking a cigar. Jupiter’s beauty fills the frame. It’s illumination amplified by the smoke filled office. He takes a long, slow drag and softly exhales the quaff of smoke. “It is…unfortunate.” “Our research team thinks it...
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    Semi-professional (I haven't made it to Hollywood just yet) and as a hobby. If I ever "make it", one of my goals will be to make a WC2 (Minus the Pilgrim stuff and the original cast). I was kind of surprised to see that you took the effort to do that, if you wanna do that for the rest of the...
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    I know, I mainly write scripts and I just recently got back into writing in novel form. And to answer some things that some of you have wondered, the fighters are Kilrathi but they're not new. This is story is about how they were created and come into play in the war. The rader being distorted...
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    Prologue ------ “Lock it down and move it out. What’re ya waiting for, Private!” ------ The loading docks of the carrier are especially busy today, being its maiden voyage and all. On the of it’s launch; it was so appropriately dubbed the TCS Juggernaut. It was a massive 1000 meters long and...
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