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Well sometimes it pays to employ the K.I.S.S. principle...especially if you're half-asleep.

Then it's time to turn about. *shrug* Well they looked squidlike to me. Anybody else care to comment on the origin of Steltek...or am I left to my own devices on this one?

klaus: Only when I have to. Quarto: Ever hear the expression, "Too many cooks spoil the broth?" The ship is there to help the pilot, not fly for him...though survival could be a directive. A glitch. Well actually an interpretation. Remember humans can't receive Sthrisk's singals...as of...

5. One unwashed patient more is one more possible infected ward, that's the difference. I agree the comment was a good idea but this is a hospital for goodness sakes. It would have been a completely different matter if they had just dumped him in a bunk to sleep it off.

Well I'm glad the originality aspect was well received thus far. I just want to push the boundary of intuitive piloting a bit. I'm pretty sure most pilots feel at one with their machines. Imagine what a blend of mechanics and organics could do to the way humans pilot their vehicles? Though I...

Quarto: Yer right laddie. T'aint up to date yet, but it's only missing this chapter which I'll probably add tommorrow. Vondoom: You can see what I've written so far of Privateer: Recall here http://home.elka.pw.edu.pl/~mkorzen1/wc/Recall.html And I'd appreciate you pointing out those...

Which makes me wonder how many people using the chat zone can read. *flee*

5. Yes well nurses do have certain...um...duties. 10. But then you have an overfondness of elipsis. 12. Nor any manners. 18. Alright, I'm going already. 19. There were quite a few more. I only pointed out this particular one and 21 because the others weren't as incorrect as those. 23...

Um, is this really the right CIC chat zone to be discussing this?

It's been a long time coming but I hope I can develop the ideas contained below in some interesting ways. 2681.039.0526 - First Contact James yawned profusely. He hadn't slept all too well. The excitement had kept him tossing and turning in his bunk for hours. When he finally drifted off, a...

Ah so you've finally show up again. Yes as a matter of fact I'm posting First Contact just now. The comments on comments you will have to wait for.

Well it's been a while, but here are my comments - finally. <OL TYPE=1> <LI>&gt;XIII. Homeward.&lt; - Odd sort of title I must say since I'm quite sure Weaver knows just where home is...yet. <LI>&gt;With friends like this, he would always be safe!&lt; - Only his friends can't land for him...

2. Actually in that particular case I preferred gravity-less - and I wouldn't trust word too much since it suggested gravitity. 4. I remember that perfectly well but I dinna have a reference feline on paw before. 8. It just seemed like one of those gray areas that needed filling and you did...

Aw keep yer shirt on. I did pick the nits in the end didn't I? 2. &gt;He approached the door slowly, sticking his hands out so as not to smash headlong into it in this gravity-less environment.&lt; - Lesee here now. How about, "He aproached slowly, stretching his hands out so as not to smash...

<OL TYPE=1> <LI>&gt;sticking his hands out&lt; - How about stretching instead? <LI>&gt;into it in this&lt; - Consider rewording somehow. <LI>&gt;He frowned, feeling strange, jagged holes beneath his fingers.&lt; - Sounds like he felt strange and not the jagged holes were strange. <LI>&gt;three...