He'll Be Brief(ing) (September 9, 2007)

Bandit LOAF · 09-08-2007, 17:00

IronDuke has released two 'screens' from his Wing Commander Tac Ops pen and paper game project. He says: "I spent some time on designing character sheets and briefings, as well. The current designs would work for PBM gaming and the PC game Mike-L is still working on. They're more or less drafts, so feel free to tell me what you think!" They look good to me!

--
Original update published on September 9, 2007

LeHah · 09-09-2007, 14:07

I think they look really good.

Two small suggestions, if I might. The first is the picture you used for the character bio looks a little too much like you took it out of a book you found at a barber shop. Obviously, you probably can't put someone in a Confed flight suit - but its a little TOO stylish, you know?

The second is that the briefing picture is a bit too dark, at least on my monitor...

Ironduke · 09-11-2007, 00:32

Let me quote myself here:

Quote:

Well, I'd like to change the pilot pic into something more WC2-like with, you know, pixels and all.

And you think the briefing map backdrop (starfield) is too dark? Or is it too dark in general?

Anyway, thanks for the feedback!

09-08-2007, 17:00	#1
Bandit LOAF It wears the skull of its dead mother on its head. When it becomes lonesome, it is said to cry loudly. Join Date: Jan 2000 Location: Ashton, MD, USA Posts: 23,934	He'll Be Brief(ing) (September 9, 2007) IronDuke has released two 'screens' from his Wing Commander Tac Ops pen and paper game project. He says: "I spent some time on designing character sheets and briefings, as well. The current designs would work for PBM gaming and the PC game Mike-L is still working on. They're more or less drafts, so feel free to tell me what you think!" They look good to me! -- Original update published on September 9, 2007

09-09-2007, 14:07	#2
LeHah 212th Special Ops, "The Old Man's Eyes And Ears" Join Date: May 2000 Location: Blackmane System Posts: 7,208	I think they look really good. Two small suggestions, if I might. The first is the picture you used for the character bio looks a little too much like you took it out of a book you found at a barber shop. Obviously, you probably can't put someone in a Confed flight suit - but its a little TOO stylish, you know? The second is that the briefing picture is a bit too dark, at least on my monitor... __________________ Gleaming shell of an outworn lie; fable of Right divine -- You gained your crowns by heritage, but Blood was the price of mine. The throne that I won by blood and sweat, by Crom, I will not sell For promise of valleys filled with gold, or threat of the Halls of Hell!

Thread Tools
Show Printable Version Email this Page
Display Modes
Linear Mode Switch to Hybrid Mode Switch to Threaded Mode