I was almost tempted to point out that Joshua Bondarevsky was a Marine, but then I remembered this is an alternate history thing, so that's fine, I suppose. Although I'm still not entirely sure where your story is going. Also, it's a bad idea to randomly switch tenses from past to present and back, etc. Stick with the past tense, I suggest. Otherwise, keep at it.
Oh, and leave some comments, man, if you're reading my story. I love to hear what people have to say!