Judgement Day update5

Stunner

Rear Admiral
After a few seconds of peace the group does a fly-by the recage of Margar's fighter in memory and paying honor. Then they receive a comm from the durago thanking and congradulating them for their victory and their condolences for the loss of their wingman and friend. To avoid further damage the durango asks if the 5 of them could escort it back to Nemesis for if nothing else then to talk to captain Maxfield about mabey borrowing one of it's plunkett cruisers or fighter wings since all of it's few piolots were killed and the ship was on it's way to recieve it's new crew and upgraded systems but now must stop off and get repairs, so it will need an escort of some type.

So the fighters form a escort pattern around the ship and escort it back to the Nemesis. Once there the Nemesis hails the durango class and speaks to the captain and asks if him as well as the senior officers will shuttle over to the Nemesis, as well as Pimp Daddy and asks where Margaret is. "She is dead, she got caught in the explosion when a severly damaged borderworlds ajax cruiser ramed a pirate murphey destroyer." replies Pimp Daddy in a saddened voice. "Well as soon as the captain and senior officers of the borderworlds carrier come aboard we will have a proper funeral service for her." Replies Captain Maxfield. "Yes sir."

After everyone has landed a shuttle is sent over to the borderworlds carrier and picks up the officers and brings them back to the Nemesis. Once the borderworlds crew has been introduced and debreifed on the attack by pirates which was actually informative to the Nemesis as well as confed and their mission. There was a borderworlds spy who held the rank of captain in the pirate factions who had much dealings with the priate/kilrathi terrorizing attacks on both confed and the borderworlds, as well as technical information on nephilem technology captured by the pirates. Unfortunatly he was killed in the attacks when he took out a fighter and headed for the carrier, he never made it to the carrier bay. The pirates wanted to make sure that he couldnt report to anyone what he knows.

After the debreifing the captian of the carrier and his officers ask if they may instead of going to temporary quarters right away or returning to the carrier if they may join the Nemesis crew at Margaret's funeral since she died while helping to defend them in the attack. The captain agrees to allow them to attend the funeral service. {Funeral serivice}

So after the funeral serivice the piolots all head to the bar for a bit of reflection and mini service of their own, save Vampira. "Are you comming dear?" Asks Direwolf. "Yes hun in a bit I need to talk to Captain Maxfield for a minute I will join you in the bar I promise I wont be but 5 minutes." replies Jaden. "Alright love." replies Billy in a hesatant manner. "Captain Maxfield, I hear that the borderworlds carrier needs a fighter escort right? "Yes that's right I was about to look at the roster to see could be transfered if I couldnt get any volunteers." "Well sir with your permission I would like to be one of the fighters escorting. I want to see more action and this is almost a guarente that this will be a shot to see some sir." "Yes most definitly since the pirate group never came back I am betting they think that the borderworlds carrier group is still out there and destroyed the group some how so they will be on hightened partols. But since it is down to the carrier alone it should be able to slip through the systems more quckly and quietly. What about Billy will he be joining you?" "No sir I want him to stay here so I have something to come back to and when I return we will be getting married." "Alright but I want no less then 4 fighters as escort and I have already talked to the captains of the cruisers and Captain Hunter of the Alexander says he will help provide escort as well." "Thank you captain and as for the rest of the volunteers I will talk to the rest of us and see who I can get and if I cant then you will just have to order someone to go." "Alright Jaden you have 1 hour to get your wing together. We have gotten a transmission from another vesuvius class that they have taken on too many piolts in recent weeks and is going to be transfering them to the Nemesis about an hour after you and the borderworlders jump out." "Yes sir, I understand and will comply!"

Once at the bar Jaden sees Smallfry, Hump-dog and Whorebag talking to each other alone at one of the tables and Billy is not there he went to the restroom so she knew she had to act quickly. So she talks to Smallfry, Hump-dog and Whorebag about going on the mission to escort the borderworlds ship. After a long debate they finally agree to go on this mission. Better that then have to have the captain resort to assigning them and most probably to the mission anyway. So Jaden tells Megan, Jared and Leha not to say anything to ANYONE especailly Billy. They agree but wonder to themselves why still though. Well upon Billy's return he suprises the group by saying "So talking about me? I heard my name, what's going on?" "Oh nothing just chattin about who's gonna be what at our wedding when we have one." replies Jaden. "Ahh I see dear, well anyways so while I'm up does anyone want a drink?" "No thanks" replies Megan, Jared, and Leha.

Well Jaden's hour is now up and she must head to the changing room with her wing to get ready to escort the borderworlds craft. So she kisses Billy goodbye and says she will be back in a bit she has to go do something she just remembered. Leha and Megan escuse themselves to go run a chore for Ginger that she asked them to do earlier and they needed Jared's help as well. He is sceptical with everyone just up and leaving him like that but to a point blows it off but just as Ginger comes by to wipe off the table he asks her if she asked those 3 to do anything for her earlier and she told him no why? So now Billy is really suspicious as to what Jaden is up to. So Billy set's off to find her and runs into the Adam Gideon and he asks the CAG if he has seen where all of them went? "Why yes actually they are headed for the changing room they are on their way off as escorts with the borderworlds ship, why?" "Oh no reason I was just wondered, well thank you Adam." "No problem Billy."
 
It needs some proper paragraphing, like a new line after each line (the stuff someone says before the next person says anything, or before a new event takes place). Then there are some spelling errors (wreckage), and the Durango should be capitalised, I believe.
 
Paragraphing was never my best thing. I just write till I cant think or till I have to stop, but will try and do better
 
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