Wing Commander CIC

Hi,

Some of you may remember me. A long time ago, I posted a lot here.

Anyway, I was writing a story back then. I never got very far, and reading it now, I'm not exactly sure where the hell I was going with it. I'm not a terrific writer...some of the parts seem downright bad.

http://www.redshift.com/~harlidobib/Story/wc.html

Any comments or suggestions?
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