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Ooh, another chapter to pit nick. <OL TYPE=1> <LI>&gt;Or was it just déjà vu?&lt; - Something happened there. <LI>&gt;getting closer… always closer.&lt; - How about "getting ever closer?" <LI>&gt;Lawrence pulled a hard turn&lt; - It'd have been funny if he actually did that. <LI>&gt;You’re...

Hey I heard that Quarto! Just because I haven't nit-picked in a while, doesn't mean I don't read the stuff every once in a while.

I tend to side with Quarto on that one. Let's stick with what's documented, and only the games provide any decent sort of that. Anything that can go 100x the speed of almost anything else is highly questionable. And what's all this talk of Business Systems?

Dralthi5: That's it? BTW, the http://home.elka.pw.edu.pl/~mkorzen1/wc/Recall.html has been updated to include up to the last section but without the most recent corrections.

Wow. Somebody's actually reading this stuff...finally? Thanks for the links Quarto. I'll have to update my html version. For those interested, the first few sectinons are in a more readable format at http://home.elka.pw.edu.pl/~mkorzen1/wc/Recall.html .

1. So was I. 3. *shrug* 7. *bow* 12. Cause nobody else bothers to nitpick...or read the stories. *sulk* 15. So does death, but you don't see me jumping off a cliff. 17. Cheers sounds more Austraa'in. 21. Well I just got the impression that bulk was too small for a planed. Maybe its vast bulk...

LOA-Deadman: Is it going to be like an internet based interactive story? JavaScript perhaps?

1. Because there are enough elipsis out there. 3. Yes, but I was actually more concerned about using revenge instead of vengance. Maybe "would not resign his vengance?" 4. Nah, just leave it be then. 7. Traversing, passing, progressing, pressing on, proceeding, hurtling. Need more? 8. Aye, a...

No name huh? Well thanks for the info. I will no doubt come in handy. And yes I remember Lemule Monkhouse.

That's no excuse. Aye, that you do. I know the feeling. It was good - there's no need to beg. Well here goes... <OL TYPE=1> <LI>&gt;that unmistakable whine… the jump drive was powering down.&lt; - Maybe a dash would be better than an elipsis. <LI>&gt;that is, unless the Kilrathi do...

Just to let you know I have indeed grabbed the chapter and started reading it. Of course I left the nitpicks on one of the uni systems so I won't get it done tonight. Expect it sometime tommorrow.

I'm always here. Heh. So I see my posts had the desired effect...again. I'll check it out ASAP. Oh and don't get too comfy. Next section "First Contact" should be done in a few days...well maybe tonight. Nothing like a little healthy competition to get inspired eh? 13. You don't know...

1. Heh. Of course he's good. They wouldn't have chosen him to test pilot the Steltek craft otherwise...or would they. 4. Naw, I had to fire up the non-CDROM version of my brain for that one...and Terrell's brand spanking new office. The tail wasn't detrimental it just got in the way...

1. He said like, not better or worse. James doesn't like the Epee either, so there. You must admit though despite it only being the end of a battle, his ship did seem rather week. 2. Might be, but I don't think the plural form is required. 3. Well I already used elegant. I'll think about...

2. Only the best get assigned to a project of such importance. 5. Picky, picky. As you will no doubt have noticed I have been trying to keep the other stuff in non numerical form. And yes I do belive proper creative writing shouldn't contain number. 9. It will...I hope. 10. Actually I...

1. *nod* 2. Uh. No will change to "the Colonel" to avoid further confuzzlement. 3. Yup. I figured I'd throw one in since I have so many non-stereotypical ones about. 4. Dr. Adams is the chief scientist in another team that worked earlier that morning. Don't worry, all will be explained. 5...

Aside from the first scene, this section wasn't even meant to exist; but since I've already written it, here it is. Probably the oddest to date, but then it is Springtime. You decide if it realistic or not and let me know. --------------------------------------- 2681.038.2112 - A Little...

klaus: It's not over till the fat Colonel sings - and since I haven't yet introduced one... And yes you're right. Well spotted. [This message has been edited by Matrix (edited May 19, 2000).]

2681.037.0902 - Down to Business Thomas rapped lightly on the thick, decorated door. He was sure that it was real wood producing the hollow sound. Without waiting for acknowledgement he reached for the handle. It smoothly slid away under the pressure of his palm, until with a gentle click the...

I still haven't read the prologue, but I probably will in a fe days. As to Ch. 1, Take your time. Remeber it's quality not quantity that counts. Plot sounds cool though. Going down the list... Silent Warrior: If Dralthi5 wrote like you, it wouldn't be a Dralthi5 original now would it...